I hang your name
about my neck
and it dangles
between my breasts.
Sometimes a pendant;
beautiful
light,
inobtrusive
yet reassuring me that
it's there.
Sometimes a boulder;
burdening me
with the very idea of
your existence.
Rock,
boulder,
diamond
or coloured glass,
it changes face
with the varying moods
of my love
and indifference
and reminds me
of your place
in my Book.
8 comments:
nice as always :)
wow! thats quite an ode to humble mangalsutra! :)
which remind me, i need to get mine repaired! Cubby broke it ages ago!
gorgeous, namesake!
cheers!
abha
@Monika: Thank you, as always!
@Namesake: Wow! I wasn't even thinking of a mangalsutra when I wrote this (we Bongs don't wear them, you see). It was jus a stray thought that popped into my head as I was holding my pendant and reading something.
see! i always knew i had no nose for poetry!! i should have said something generic!! :p
cheers!
abha
@namesake: Listen girl, I simply LOVED your interpretation of it! I didn't see it that way, but now I do! Poetry is a personal experience, just like art...it's your interpretation that matters. There's no real right or wrong, it's all subjective.
Very honest!
Loved it!
Hey nice !
Post a Comment